Friday 13 April 2018
WRITING
We were writing about what we like and what we wanted to write about that is our favorite thing to write.
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Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hi Novarhn, my name is Blake from Awahono School. I like how you have described things about Fortnite Battle Royale. Maybe next time you could add pictures of all the things you told us? Have you checked that it all makes sense? Apart from those little mistakes it was very informational I didn't know all those things until I read this. Maybe you could check out my blog here: https://paparoarangeblakeg.blogspot.co.nz/
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Blake
Hello Novarhn, I'm Deakyn from Awahono School. I really like your writing post about Fortnite. It reminds me of when I play it because it is so much fun to play. There are things that need fixing though. You haven't put capitals at the start of some of your sentences. I think it is still very cool. I will visit your blog some more too. I hope you can visit my blog.
ReplyDeleteCopy this link to visit my blog: http://awahonodeakynh.blogspot.co.nz/
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Deakyn
Hi Novarhn im Sebastian from Waikowhai Primary School I really like your fortnite blog-post. I Liked it because I play fortnite battle royale as well. You made me think of the first time my cousin introduced to fortnite.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you can also right about why you like playing fortnite.